My favorite story is raul the drummer from Chile. The author put 13 items in the right place. I really enjoy reading his story. The author make the story completely and correct grammar. The plot also very interesting. The structure is good and make reader understand easily.
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The poorest story I think is talk about visiting museum. The author just lists the 13 items through what she sees. I think it is boring to reading, because I can guess what happen in the next. Actually, I have a mixed in the story. I think the author can make the story completely and interesting.
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